{"id":1509,"date":"2019-04-05T00:10:03","date_gmt":"2019-04-05T04:10:03","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.hdhstory.net\/Storyblog\/?p=1509"},"modified":"2019-04-03T14:48:03","modified_gmt":"2019-04-03T18:48:03","slug":"whiplash-f-its-not-one-thing-its-another","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.hdhstory.net\/Storyblog\/?p=1509","title":{"rendered":"Whiplash! \u201cE\u201d needs to focus."},"content":{"rendered":"

Whiplash: An injury to the neck caused by an abrupt jerking motion of the head, either backward or forward; And in the case of writing or speaking, can be caused by a rapid change of topic without prior notice.<\/span><\/i><\/span><\/p>\n

\"\"<\/a>Whiplash! – \u201cE\u201d needs to focus.<\/b><\/p>\n

It had been a long day for Evan. The energy that he needed to complete building that weapon was waning. At the beginning of the day he was filled with enthusiasm and drive. Successful completion of this task and a positive test run would demonstrate that there were better ways to subdue criminals that didn\u2019t risk harming innocent bystanders. It was a simple device. Using a laser targeting sight, quantum traces of DNA could be transferr\"\"<\/a>ed to the weapon, selecting one person and that person alone. Firing the weapon at that point would send out a pinpoint charge of electricity that would incapacitate its target instantly. It couldn\u2019t fail. <\/span><\/p>\n

But the day was getting late and Evan’s energy drain made him careless. In his haste to be done he accidentally triggered both the laser and the firing mechanism at the same time. And what does a weapon do, when there is no specific DNA trace? It generates its own and continues to generate new ones at an astronomical rate, finding as many targets as it can. His workspace being across the street from a Mega-Mall wasn\u2019t going to help.<\/span><\/p>\n

Whiplash!<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n

If you want to maintain your healthy disposition and physical well being you should exercise. Exercise has the benefits of toning up your muscles and revitalizing your spirits so that you can continue to work and play for longer periods of time. Or at least that is what everyone says. <\/span><\/p>\n

Me personally, I just like sitting and writing. My old FitBit used to have me take at least 250 steps every hour for 9 straight hours. That was always frustrating when I was sitting in a car for a 2-hour drive or at a movie. You might see me driving while moving my arm up and down 250 times, so I wouldn\u2019t lose that consecutive streak. My new watch only wants me to stand up for a minute at least 12 hours during the day, and they don\u2019t have to be consecutive hours. I like that much better and I can do that.<\/span><\/p>\n

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I set my devices to let me know if I\u2019ve made my goal of 6,000 steps in a day. It does feel good if I accomplish that. But whether I do or not, as long as I\u2019m not gaining weight and still feel good about myself, that\u2019s enough exercise for me. Well, it\u2019s really not, but I\u2019d like to convince myself that it is. <\/span><\/p>\n

Whiplash!<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n

Evan knew that he was in big trouble as screams were heard across the street. He could hear the sirens wailing and the bustle of the crowd below his open window; and then there was silence.<\/span><\/p>\n

Whiplash!<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n

Sometimes when I am writing a piece the part that is the most difficult to write is the ending. You want the ending to resolve all of the content that you have created within the body of your text. If it is a story, you want it to be a somewhat thought-provoking yet satisfying end. \u201cHe woke up and it was all a dream,\u201d just doesn\u2019t make it. <\/span><\/p>\n

If it is a non-fiction piece you want the readers to leave with a sense of understanding. <\/span><\/p>\n

Sometimes, however, having the ending thought out first helps guide you in writing the whole piece. One story I\u2019m working on, I started it with a problem, began developing that problem and then got stuck as to where to go so I wrote the ending next. I\u2019m still working on the story, but at least I know where it is headed.<\/span><\/p>\n

As a reader, I never look at the ending of a story until I get to it. I know there are those of you out there that need to know how mysteries are going to end up before you finish reading, but I like to be surprised. And then there those writers that start a story and leave you with a cliffhanger at the end, leaving things unresolved. That can be really frustrating.<\/span><\/p>\n

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Whiplash!<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n

So what\u2019s going to happen to Evan? Do you use exercise to keep up your energy? Maybe Evan should have. And are you a person that likes to know the ending of a book before you get there? Make sure you let me know.<\/span><\/p>\n

Till we meet again\u2026 \u201cF\u201d it\u2019s not one thing, it\u2019s another.<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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