Original Stories

Hiking thoughts

Posted on August 3, 2008 at 9:15 pm

A walk in the woods

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The dreariness of the day limits the amount of hikers

The quiet of the forest

Streams formed by the rain of yesterday

Some trickling down the path we walk on

Others in torrents, slowly eroding the sands beneath our feet

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Boulders covered with moss and lichen

Slimy to the touch, slippery to traverse

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Do we take the longer hike around the ridge to the top

Or the shorter, straight up on the wet boulders

The longer has the view, the shorter has the adventure

All roads lead to Rome, so we take the long way up, the short way down.

Fog descends from above to cover the vista view

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It plays peek-a-boo with us, teasing us with glimpses of the lake

Our choice was good, we get to see sites that the other hikers miss in the fog

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The way back is steep

Jackets get tied around our waists

Sweat drenches our shirts as we complete our journey

A passerby takes a picture of the three of us.

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It is the only one of us three together on our week-long trip.

Back to the solitude of our cottage

Lunch, a rest and then back on the road again.

 

Story help

Posted on February 7, 2008 at 12:06 pm

I’m working on a story that I wrote year’s ago and want to make into a telling version. I would appreciate it if you could look at it and help me revise it. I’d be grateful for any revisions and/or edits that make it a better story (both in telling and written form). Thanks.

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Writing Songs

Posted on April 11, 2007 at 11:55 am

I’ve always been impressed how singer/storytellers like Bill Harley, Michael Parent, and others create the songs that they write and perform. In the past year, I’ve written two songs, both of which I would like to use in my storytelling events. What has fascinated me is how these songs came to me.
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Characters – Joseph

Posted on January 16, 2007 at 10:52 am

Joseph is the consummate analyst. He has spent years studying to be a psychologist with the hopes of getting a job to help fix all of the wrongs in peoples’ lives. For Joseph there is no down time. Any interaction he has with another is an opportunity to practice his craft. No one can speak with him without giving away hidden, deep unfulfilled thoughts that need to be repaired. A simple, “Hello Joseph, how are you doing?” leads to the inevitable, “What does he really want from me? It must be his deep insecurity and need for affection, which derived from a childhood trauma.”

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Characters – Joanna

Posted on January 1, 2007 at 4:27 pm

Joanna is a worrier. Think of anything that could go wrong and she’s already thought of it and is afraid it will happen.
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Characters – Julie

Posted on December 27, 2006 at 12:15 am

Julie is a highly intelligent woman. She is well read and has opinions on many topics of discussion. She is meticulous in her thinking, which at times makes it difficult for her to accept other people’s points of view. Continue reading Characters – Julie…

Characters – Alvin

Posted on December 24, 2006 at 12:14 pm

From the look on Alvin’s face you know that he is not there. It’s that vacant stare, the look of far awayness. Somewhere out there on some other dimensional plane, Alvin is in deep thought, unraveling the mysteries of the universe. Alvin can recite back to you every word that you’ve spoken, but ask him what you were talking about and he is clueless. At least that what other’s say about him.
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Characters – Leonard

Posted on December 23, 2006 at 3:45 pm

Observing and listening to people wherever I go gives me wonderful descriptions for characters in my writing. The characters I will describe in the next few posts come from real people. They could be just one person, but more likely they are a combination of traits from a few. Writing about people based on reality, makes the reader/listener feel more connected to your stories. Are the traits that I write about in the next few posts familiar to people that you have come in contact with?

Take the following:

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Original Story – Part 1 – You’re an Animal

Posted on December 11, 2006 at 11:02 pm

This is an event in my life that I want to create into a telling story. I’ll begin it today and as the days go on I will continue to elaborate on the event. When I am done, I will look back at it and revise it to mold it into a tellable story. Should I keep it my personal story? or fictionalize it with other characters? Any thoughts would be appreciated.

I played softball for in the local community recreation league for over 10 years. It was a very friendly league. No umpires, batters got 3 swings, coaches on first and third made the calls, etc. The team I played on was made up of a bunch of middle-aged teachers and friends. It was a fun league that had teams from high school/college kids ranging in age from late teens to early 20s, to the Boys of Summer team that was made up of men in their 50’s and 60’s for the most part. Age-wise we fell somewhere to the right of middle nearer the oldest group.
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Writing Stories

Posted on December 6, 2006 at 11:24 am

“With a questioning look on his face, Marty announced…” “John spoke gruffly” Sentences like that might work in a story written for readers. But as a teller of tales, one doesn’t need some of the expressions that can be shown on the teller’s face as he/she tells. Depending on the teller’s technique, using things such as physical stance (to show old, out of shape), voice skill (to show being scared, young, happy) can be done through the telling. Is story writing for a tale to be told different from story writing for one that is read? Continue reading Writing Stories…

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