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Steering the Craft – Sentence/Paragraph exercise

Posted on May 3, 2011 at 9:53 am

This is a continuation of the exercises from the Ursula K. Le Guin’s book, Steering the Craft: Exercises and Discussions on Story Writing for the Lone Navigator or the Mutinous Crew

Part one of this assignment was to write a paragraph of narrative, 100-150 words, in sentences of seven or fewer words. Each sentence must have a subject and a verb.

Sitting at my writer’s desk and looking out my window this is what I saw:

A woodpecker sits on the feeder. It is outside my balcony window. It has a red head. It is searching for bits of food. There is not much food left for it. A squirrel pauses on the ground. It looks up at the woodpecker. It must decide soon. Should I try or not? Though tempting, there is a cage. The cage protects the food. The woodpecker leaves. The squirrel advances. Cage or not it will eat. As it climbs it surveys obstacles. Poking through the cage it tries. It does not get much seed. The woodpecker was not a neat eater. It was very picky. Much of the food was tossed aside. “Aside” means it landed on the ground. Looking down the squirrel notices something. There is more food on the ground. It would be much easier to get. Squirrels appear to have little brains. They also perseverate. It continues to try the cage.

 

Part two was a lot harder. Write a half-page of narrative, up to 350 words, which is all one sentence.

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Unfinished story

Posted on December 4, 2010 at 1:45 pm

You’ve heard of Schubert’s “Unfinished Symphony”? Consider this my “Unfinished Story”. What I’ve written is exactly what was going around in my head one night. It was pleading with me to be written down. So I have done that. I’m welcome to any suggestions as to where I should take it from here.

Once there was a story. It was a simple story about a king and a queen. They were unable to have children and wanted an heir. As in most tales they made a deal to have a  a child. Of course the condition agreed upon required them to give up something valuable when the child reached a certain age. The condition didn’t concern the king or queen when the agreement was made, however when the child came of age they needed a way to break the agreement. The story unfolds and a quest is taken until finally all things work out in the end except for the proposer of the deal. As I said a simple story.

But now our story begins, because this story had nowhere to go. Yes, it was created. There was a wonderful beginning and a happy ending, but until it could be shared it had no life.

Go Green song

Posted on September 28, 2009 at 4:34 pm

These are the lyrics of a new song that I wrote for a Go Green Festival I’ll be performing at in November.

Go Green

by Harvey Heilbrun

©2009

Chorus

We must Go Green and work to save our planet

Think about the things we do that can affect us all

We must Go Green and try to change our actions

Save the earth, improve our lives and stand up tall.


When leaving rooms turn off the lights, conserve electric power

Turn off TVs, and pull out plugs that you’re not using now

Fix all those leaks, don’t let them drip and take a shorter shower

It’s not so hard to save this earth if you know how.

Chorus

The great outdoors is calling us; there is a good solution.

Take a walk or ride your bike, don’t always use the car.

Don’t litter, or waste paper, keep noise down, stop pollution

By planting trees and growing plants we will go far.

Chorus

Reduce the waste you make each day, Reuse what you don’t throw out

Recycle what you can so we can help the world revive

Each little thing we do each day helps build a good tomorrow

So do your best, it all adds up, help us survive.

Chorus

Click here to hear Go Green

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Time travel and dreams

Posted on August 1, 2009 at 3:06 pm

Lately I’ve been having a number of dreams and discussions about time travel. I’ve always been fascinated by the concept of time travel through TV shows and movies I watch, and the books I read. So while my son has dreams that are vivid but can’t be remembered and my wife has dreams about the real world and all issues that come with it, I dream about time and how to move through it.

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Richman, Poorman

Posted on July 14, 2009 at 11:12 am

This is an extended story I wrote based on a translated story from the book:Le cercle des menteurs contes philosophi (The Circle of Liars, philosophical tales from around the world) by Jean Claude Carriére

Once upon a time there was a beautiful city on the outskirts of a great forest. In the city lived an extremely rich man and an extremely poor man. Each had a son; by chance, the two young men had been born on the same day in the same year.

If I told you that both of those boys grew up in the same way, I would not be telling the truth. Though they lived in the same city, at the same time, they experienced their parents’ love and example and guidance in totally different ways.

The rich man’s son was provided everything he wanted: toys, clothing, exotic foods. He had it all! He attended the best schools and vacationed at the most luxurious resorts. He had nursemaids, cooks, valets, and a chauffeur who catered to his needs. He rarely did anything for himself. His parents loved him dearly and showed him, by providing him with all his wants. That is how he grew up.

The poor man’s son was also privileged. Since purchasing toys was out of the question, his father  cleverly devised ones for him to play with out of materials at hand. He often accompanied his father on trips and errands. Being an astute observer, he soon made his own toys and later small pieces of furniture for the household. The family did not have rich, sumptuous meals, but there was sufficient plain basic food to prevent hunger pangs. His mother was a clever cook, and she taught him much about stretching food supplies. With her help, he learned to raise vegetables from seed and to keep a small flock of chickens. He delighted in quiet walks in the forest, listening to the subtle sounds of nature; sometimes watching young animals at play. When opportunity arose he walked about the city too, and studied people as they went about their lives. He marveled at the variety of things they did. As a teenager, he found work himself, fixing neighbors fences, delivering packages for local stores, taking care of people’s animals. His income improved the family’s way of life. His father and mother were so proud! They could not have wished for a better son. That is how he grew up.

On the day the two young men turned 18, the very wealthy man brought his son to the top of a mountain.  Below, the entire city spread out before them. “Look,” said the father,” one day this will all be yours”.

On that same day, the poor man also brought his son to the mountain. They gazed down at the bustling city, the vast fields, the trees of the great forest and the father said to his son, “Look.”

Both were satisfied.

More Lil

Posted on January 22, 2009 at 10:11 pm

Great Aunt Lil never married. That is not to say that she didn’t have her beaus and crushes throughout her life. She never met that one person that epitomized the high ideals that she set for herself. Of all of the stories Aunt Lil shared, the ones about Jack were my favorites. Continue reading More Lil…

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Let it snow

Posted on January 8, 2009 at 7:54 pm

I enjoy snow. I feel for all those people that live in the southern climes that don’t get the opportunity to see and play with snow. But then I assume that all those people feel for me not having the opportunity to enjoy warm weather all of the time and what that brings. When I was young we had our own built in snow slope right outside my apartment building. If you got a good dumping of snow there was a walkway between the hill next to our house and the little park that was there also that was perfect for sledding. Here’s a picture of my dad and me sledding down at the end of that runway. If you were really good and got up enough speed, you could make it all the way out to the street and hope no cars were coming. In this picture, we did make it to the street.

Sledding with my father by our apartment

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Great Aunt Lil’s decree

Posted on November 12, 2008 at 10:49 am

I began teaching in the early 1970’s. My biggest problem was credibility and my youthful appearance. I was a newbie. At one of my first Open Houses, I overheard a parent of one of my students comment that she couldn’t figure out who was the teacher. I was standing right in front of her. She thought I looked too much like a student.  The parent was hesitant to have her daughter in my class;  she wanted a teacher with more experience.

I resolved at that point to do something. Experience I would get by teaching more but my appearance I could change. I chose to grow a beard. Continue reading Great Aunt Lil’s decree…

Great Aunt Lil

Posted on November 10, 2008 at 1:40 pm

I’m not sure where I’m going with this yet. It came to mind as I was trying to sleep last night:

Of all the members of the family, she is the most looked up to. Her 90 plus years not withstanding, she commands deference with just the tone and confidence in her voice. Great Aunt Lil was a distinctive woman from an early age. Her quest for knowledge out shined all the rest of her family, which would explain why she is the one we all go to when we need advice. There was not a problem, issue or need that we had that she did not have some quote to guide us on our way.
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Hiking thoughts

Posted on August 3, 2008 at 9:15 pm

A walk in the woods

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The dreariness of the day limits the amount of hikers

The quiet of the forest

Streams formed by the rain of yesterday

Some trickling down the path we walk on

Others in torrents, slowly eroding the sands beneath our feet

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Boulders covered with moss and lichen

Slimy to the touch, slippery to traverse

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Do we take the longer hike around the ridge to the top

Or the shorter, straight up on the wet boulders

The longer has the view, the shorter has the adventure

All roads lead to Rome, so we take the long way up, the short way down.

Fog descends from above to cover the vista view

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It plays peek-a-boo with us, teasing us with glimpses of the lake

Our choice was good, we get to see sites that the other hikers miss in the fog

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The way back is steep

Jackets get tied around our waists

Sweat drenches our shirts as we complete our journey

A passerby takes a picture of the three of us.

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It is the only one of us three together on our week-long trip.

Back to the solitude of our cottage

Lunch, a rest and then back on the road again.

 

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